This week we have been writing about our bedroom and writing a description. This is my description of my room I hope you like it. I found it difficult write some of the descriptions.
My favourite part about my room is that it is warm and clean, Unlike my sisters.
It is also dark and peaceful. But my favorite part is that when
I open my window and the smell of pollen comes in.
It is also dark and peaceful. But my favorite part is that when
I open my window the smell of pollen comes in, You can also hear the birds chirping
the sound is very soothing.
I think the shape of my room is weird because it has an angled roof and a
cupboard that’s built in, but overall I think it is really different. There is also
carpet instead of floor which is really soft. My bed is short and bouncy But when I bounce I hit my head on the roof. I also have a mirror at the
end of my bed which is nice because I can see myself in the morning.
I think my room is the tidiest room in the house,
my family also think it is tidy. In the mornings I make my beb neatly and
get dressed. In my cupboard there is a heat lamp that makes it really
hot when I’m reading, but it's nice when it’s cold.
I like my bedroom because it looks clean and with the view it is all so
beautiful. It smells strongly of pollen and sometimes at night I can
hear mauporks hosting, the sound is very soft and it puts me to
sleep straight away. I always say to my mum I love it.
Even Tho my room is the smallest it’s the best.
I think my room is great and I love it. I want to keep my room forever.
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